Vertical Horizons writing 2016
This is my work so far s o what suggestions would you give me to make it better let me know. Please comment if you can:] Vertical horizons camp Kelly, Pama, Georgina, Olivia, Nikyla, Grace and I stood in order as Mrs Cribb called out our names for our cabins. All of us looked at each other in excitement and joy! Everyone in room 9 were having a meeting for remembering our activity groups. “So parents with the explorers” Nick and David. “And the kids are” Gypsy, Kalissa, Olivia, Georgina, Ubai and Lloyd. Our first activity was the Grass Karts! I simply asked David if me and Alison could go on the first ride. “Sure” David replied. So as nervous as we both were we held our nerves and hopped into a Kart… AHHH!!!!! Alison and I were screaming our heads of in laughter… At the end me and Alison huffed and puffed and dragged the heavy cart up until we finally reached the top of the hill. After the Grass karts our group moved onto the AMAZING!!!! Flying Kiwi. When...
can't believe I didn't finish it!!!
ReplyDelete