The Paris Puppy favourite sentence

By Anonymous -
These my favorite sentences from my story
“PLONK!!!!!” Goes Lucy’s bags on the floor.
“AAAHHH SO NICE TO RELAX FINALLY!!!!!” She sighed as she bounced on her comfortable, Soft bed.

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