My best piece of writting

By Anonymous -
To Mum and Dad. I was told to write my best piece of writing and it is called The Ballet Ticket. My goal that I have been working on is included in this story and I love It. My goal is to use strong verbs and spicy adjectives.

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  1. Unknown26 March 2016 at 18:27

    I love this story kalissa u have used great describing words too captivate your readers and really give them a sense of being there with you!

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